Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Foreward to poetry anthology

            My poetry anthology is about growing up, not just getting taller, and bigger, but your thoughts toward school, and personal life. When you get older your thoughts about the environment change, what you think is cool in school changes. You’re relationships get deeper/weaker. I wrote this anthology just about some mistakes you can make when you are growing up. This is headlined by peer pressure, I really like to write a lot about peer pressure because it can really affect people.
            In my story my poems are….

foreward

Foreward to poetry anthology

            My poetry anthology is about growing up, not just getting taller, and bigger, but your thoughts toward school, and personal life. When you get older your thoughts about the environment change, what you think is cool in school changes. You’re relationships get deeper/weaker. I wrote this anthology just about some mistakes you can make when you are growing up. This is headlined by peer pressure, I really like to write a lot about peer pressure because it can really affect people.
            In my story my poems are….

Monday, January 24, 2011

poem with specific rhyme scheme

I was a good kid
In my eyes, but all day I hid
from all  the bullies
they wanted my money
and thought that they were funny 
Not 'til I  brought my knife to school
Now I was cool

My friends were scared of me 
I started cuttin'
My grades were droppin'
My cloths were poppin'

Bu one day
I used my knife  
ruined my life

Went to jail
Became pale
Parents found out
kicked me out
My life sucked
I got *ucked
Couldn't turn my life back around
'til I got found
DEAD

Saturday, January 15, 2011

poem responding to an incident

Ball Four!
The pressure goes out of my mind
I'm on base
I just have to steal and I can score
I can finally be the
star
All those games 
where I didn't get the game ball
where my performance
was overlooked
next man
walks
this is my time to shine
I will steal my base
I go right after the first pitch
I'm on third
a slow bouncer
don't go I hear
I know I can make it
I sprint home
No throw game tied
Yes!
Mobbed at the dugout,
slapping fives
I feel like a star
Like an MVP
Game won!
of to the championships!

Thursday, January 13, 2011

Poem response to a painting

There lies those pretty blue flowers
And those orange flowers
in the back
Is there something in their
I think
I see something
A light which
is getting closer what is this light
A creature?
A monster?
A human
Our Last breathe of oxygen
The rumors buzz
As the light comes closer
we become weaker 

And that day
The light came,
to take us all

I am not alive
The light's name is fall

response to a painting


This painting is painted by Vang gogh

I think of this painting as one of those paintings you take on summer days when you're bored. This painting just makes me happy, it's in a bright day. Maybe it can be the fall because the flowers are slightly falling, it looks like there are bees sucking in the nectar from the flowers It seems like there is something in the grass  on the top right corner a yellow light, is it the sun I don't know. This poem has a lot of mysteries in it. Like is there something in the grass? why are the flowers a different color as you go back?

Thursday, December 30, 2010

December Reading Challenge- Harry Potter and the prisoner of Azkaban

        It's Harry's third year at Hogwarts and so far nothing unusual is really happening, except Harry is seeing another criminal named Sirius Black on the loose in the muggle news. There is a place called Hogmeade, a place near Hogwarts where you can go and buy many treats, and pranks, but you need a guardian signature, and Harry not having anyone who knows about the wizardry world has to explain it to Uncle Vernon, and he makes a deal with Harry, one of Uncle Vernon's relatives were coming over and Harry was supposed to not do any magic or weird. So after 9 days of sucking in bad comments about Harry, on the 10th and last day, he got so mad that he made his aunt turn into a balloon, and Harry ran away he got onto the knight bus, a bus that comes to a witch or a wizard when they are having tough times, The bus took them to Diagon Alley, the place where Harry bought all his school books an needed materials, he stayed in a small motel, and the day before the train would take him to Hogwarts, he met his two best friends Ron, and Hermione. But when Harry was about to go to sleep that night he heard Ron's mom and dad talking about Harry, so the guy Sirius Black, who even the muggles knew about, was supposedly after Harry because he supposedly gave Voldemort, the greatest Dark Wizard in the world, where Harry's parents were and rumors had it that Sirius wanted to kill Harry.
           Now Harry goes on to the Hogwarts express seeing all these Sirius Black posters, and Ron's dad tells Harry to not go looking for him.On the Hogwarts express, A ghostly thing that guards the gates of azkaban, the jail Sirius Black broke out from now started going all around the world looking for Black, but one demntor comes and tries to attack Harry, as Harry faints, A Professor on the train somehow
get's rid of the dementor. As Harry proceeds through the year he hears more and more information about Sirius and how he is supposedly so evil. Throughout the year, Harry has more experiences with dementors.
Also Harry would always see this black dog with green eyes everywhere.
            Then one day Ron's mouse goes into the forbidden forest, when Ron goes to follow it, the mysterious dog drags him into a tree, and Harry and Hermione found out it was Sirius Black and that Sirius was innocent.

            In the movie it skipped many of the parts where the dementors attacked and it skipped one of the parts where Malfoy and his gang disguised as dementors but Harry fought them off with his patronus, and in the movie, it didn't really explain what was happening with Buckbeak, Hagrid's weird animal.